Tuesday, June 28, 2005

The Continuation (volume 3)

I had nothing to do so I started to write this post the same day as I wrote my last post. I think that staying in an hotel isn't so bad after all. This hotel has a buisness centre. I was lucky enough to get the oppurtuinity to use the computers.

Chapter 4, The Big Match:

The Three kids stood behind their dad and started to wish that they had weapons. But then They also thought, they don't have weapons, so why do we need them anyway. Then they saw a glob of chips come from the big ones. These ones all had some type of weapon and there first glimpse of it was a very bad one. It shot out razor sharp chips that had been nicely carved. Then Josh pulled his dad back and started to make a run for the huge tree trunks that they had carved from the trees in their house. Then he called Nick and they started to make a huge pile of wood which protected their family.
Then suddenly, Abi shouted," Watch out Josh!"
Josh turned around and ducked while he was turning. The chips flew right above his head and flew straight into the wood and the wood held toghether.
Then they knew that it was ok to start building the wall. Their dad came over to help. Then Abi was alone on the real battlefield. They immedeatly jumped to it and started to build the wall like pyramid and luckily they had closed the garage gate so they were half relaxing and half alone. when they were finished the monster still had not gotten through and that had given them time to nail it toghether. At the exact moment that they had finished the wall, the Monsters got through.

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey akash,
your story is going really good. it feels like im watching a movie. in fact there is so much happening in each episode that its tough for me to keep up!
im sorry i havent been commenting that often. i promise i will try and comment more often...
keep the story going with lots more twists and turns... it a lot of fun reading what you write...
have fun kiddo
luv divi

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